Kia Ora my name is Jacob. I like how you said when the landed on the moon and said who were the first people. Maybe next time you could add some photos or what the spaceship looked like.
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Kia Ora my name is Jacob. I like how you said when the landed on the moon and said who were the first people. Maybe next time you could add some photos or what the spaceship looked like.
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